Read my lips: A Stiff Drink

It was Jake’s story that I enjoyed most.

From reading all 3 narratives, I’m mysterified about who I the reader was. Was I the same person to all the narrators.

I think instead of chapters it would be better to head messages in terms of days sent, to give a better idea of time.

Overall probably took an hour to go through all three narratives. Of course it is up to you, how often leave narrative … you just may get pop ups tempting you back.

Next I’m going to try Karen as digital fiction, which is an app by Blast theory. Again if anyone uses either Stiff Drink or Karen; it would be interesting to see how the experience compares as our narratives may not have been the same!